Firstly, Read the prompt.
Secondly, Read the rough draft
Thirdly, Read the comment file
Finally, revise and improve the rough draft
1. please help write the essay longer, which is within 900 – 1100 words
2. my professor needs to compare the rough draft and the final draft,
please revise the essay mostly based on my rough draft, or further develop the essay based on the rough draft.
3. my writing level is very bad, so you dont need to write it to get A but get B is enough.
Thanks a lot!